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As my mother and I take a small ride, I marveled the sight of the clouds after a small precipitation. They all exhibited the shade of grey, yet different tones and hues. Some clouds were simple and others were complex with mixtures of all. The most amazing clouds were the ones that hid the luminous sun but showed proof of its decent. And somewhere, in the lull firmament, the moon was making a primeful, alightful arrival. Viewing these visions made me ponder, “Does the sky have emotions?” How it has unexpected change, “Did God give it a “free-will” or a conscience? Did it care if its emotions appease anyone?” How the warm luminescence made people blissful and animated, while the winter feeds somber emotions, such as dreariness and depression, in which I favored most. The creativity of the clouds and sky made my heart feel envious to the fact of its unmatched beauty and untamed freedom. But we took our final road to our abode; a mountainous and lavishing cloud came into my aspect. Such a panorama, gave me such a ghastly feel for its size was unseen before. But the sight of last rays of the sun peering over the towering cloud and feelings of an early moon rising behind us, made my mind full of wonderings and my heart breathless…
April 11, 2008
  • Listening to: Chiodos-Teeth the size of piano keys
  • Reading: Emily Dickinson poems...All 1,775 of them
  • Watching: Clouds!!! Oh! That one looks like a kidney
  • Playing: with kittens and teaching them Kung-Fu
  • Eating: razorblades and Cherry Pop Tarts
  • Drinking: my blood and spoiled sunshine
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priteeboy Featured By Owner May 27, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whatta poetic way of putting it. The sky, and everything in it, and beyond its boundaries have always been my most favourite part of all of nature...and yet its the only thing I can't visit at my own will, simply because people can't fly :(

I got a good visual towards the end, picturing those massive storm clouds that grow to such incredible heights, that when the sun goes down, all the cloud is dark with the exception of the very top, glowing bright orange as it is still receiving the last bit of light, even though it left the land an hour ago :sun:
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dokurome Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
Thank you for criticizing my words:bow:! I feel very honored that someone with your status would read my journal:worship:! Since I'm not good at drawing, I use words to paint certain pictures! Sometimes, it's harder to this way put I prefer words!

Yes, clouds is nature's most treasured possession...well, in my opinion anyway! It would be grand if we could fly without airplanes. Just to walk and sleep on the clouds would be awesome!

To keep the read concreted on the journal, I use certain words to draw and keep the reader in, from start to finish! The last clouds were astonishing! They looking like mountains in the sky. So dangerous and yet serene! And sun made everything even better!!

Thank you again from reading my journal!:D
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heart-defectant-art Featured By Owner May 19, 2008  Student General Artist
this is really beautiful.....it made me really feel like i was there staring up at the clouds, and i really like clouds myself, heheh *cheesy laugh* OMg!!! and yer use of so many vocabulary to describe things is amazing!! ^_^, deffinghtly words i woudnt think of..awesome job
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dokurome Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
Thanks, Ash:bow:! You're words mean alot to me!! Cloud watching should be a sport! I'd totally be champion! It was hard to use some vocab words! The thing is, I didn't use my dictionary but instead, I used my noodle! Thanks again!:dance:*lemon laugh*
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Anyry Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
I think that your words are full of beauty!
I love clouds to..., I don't think that they have some kind of conscience or any kind of feelings..., but I do think that they have a great power! They can make us feeling good, and realise that there are so much beauty in the world... :D
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dokurome Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
Thank you very much for you comment :boogie:! It's always nice to hear encouraging words! I feel the same way about clouds. There full of life and divine power but it seems as though they have emotions sometimes. Like when it's raining, it sad, or thundering, it mad, or even when it's balanced out with the sun, happy and full of bliss! And the changes in its emotions are unknown and free, that's why I both love and envy it, but that's my interpretation and I agree with yours as well! Thank you again:bow::dance:!
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Anyry Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
Yes it's true, they realy are amazing! :D
Keep being so sensitive!
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dokurome Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
:blush: I'll try! :hug:
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Anyry Featured By Owner May 12, 2008
;)
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